A Conversation for Sadako and the Peace Crane

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Post 1

AEndr, The Mad Hatter

I think I preferred it with the footnotes as those parts are not directly relevant to the story of Sadako but are pieces of historical detail.


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Post 2

Zed

I still like it, it's a very good story and a nice piece of writing.

H&K
Z


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Post 3

AEndr, The Mad Hatter

Thank you




WAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYY
My first one wholly written by me approved!!!!!!


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Post 4

Blackbottle (in mourning - I shall wear midnight)

I enjoyed reading through it again. Your first one, and already you have a picture - none of mine have ever been pictured! smiley - smiley
So, was it Edited a lot?


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Post 5

AEndr, The Mad Hatter

The footnotes were moved into the main text and that is about all the editing. If there was any typo or grammar editing, I haven't noticed.


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Post 6

Blackbottle (in mourning - I shall wear midnight)

Right, well, well done once again. smiley - smiley


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Post 7

BluesSlider

A most excellent and moving article, well done!


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Post 8

Cakewalker

Very sensitively written smiley - smiley


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Post 9

AEndr, The Mad Hatter

thank you all for your compliments smiley - smiley *blushing*


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Post 10

Legolas the Slart

A great article. Isn't it so much better when an article tells a story, they are a lot more interesting to read than a purely factual one.smiley - smiley


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Post 11

AEndr, The Mad Hatter

of course it is all fact


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Post 12

Spirit

and may i add...an inspiration to illustrate for too ... keep 'em coming, please! smiley - smiley

spirit xx


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Global Village Idiot

Fact of course, but told with a storyteller's art.
Wonderful, inspiring, and very enjoyable. It deserves all the compliments.


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Post 14

AEndr, The Mad Hatter

It is a great illustration too, so appropriate and well-thought-out.


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Post 15

Legolas the Slart

Anne Frank was all fact, but it is still an inspiring storysmiley - smiley


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