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Hehe, Boss, you've got me!

Don't laugh.

The new one is here A87786120 so don't forget to sub to it.

I've only had a quick read through and nothing glaring at me.

I'll give this some proper attention on Sunday.

Watch this space...

Who did you tick off to get stuck with this one? Or were you just the go-to Subeditor on 'Fanny Hill'?

Subscribed and waiting for questions.

Hi Boss,

I've read this now over four times, I only have one niggle and it might just be me, but...I don't like sentences beginning with 'And', there are two of them.

And everywhere else, probably

And they make the reader work,

As I say it might just be me...

Possible linky to:
A30334916 - Frankfurt am Main, Germany - Where Past Meets Present

Other than that I can't find any else.

I'll keep looking.

I like sentences that start with 'and', myself. I think that's an old English teacher tale.

I'd say, leave the first sentence alone.

Change the second sentence to 'They make the reader work.' You're right, that's stronger.

Good link, add it.

Link added.

Second sentence only has been changed .

I'll have another look in a wee while, see if I can find anything else.

Found a couple more linky dinks:

A3764621 - Email - an Introduction

A273566 - Vampires

Mags

If you can work them in, go for it.

Worked in those other links, I don't think there's anything else I can add to it.

If you're happy with this, then I am also.

Mags

Looks good to me, thanks!