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Magwitch - My name is Mags and I am funky. Started conversation Mar 2, 2013
Hehe, Boss, you've got me!
Don't laugh.
The new one is here A87786120 so don't forget to sub to it.
I've only had a quick read through and nothing glaring at me.
I'll give this some proper attention on Sunday.
Watch this space...
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Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor Posted Mar 2, 2013
Who did you tick off to get stuck with this one? Or were you just the go-to Subeditor on 'Fanny Hill'?
Subscribed and waiting for questions.
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Magwitch - My name is Mags and I am funky. Posted Mar 4, 2013
Hi Boss,
I've read this now over four times, I only have one niggle and it might just be me, but...I don't like sentences beginning with 'And', there are two of them.
And everywhere else, probably
And they make the reader work,
As I say it might just be me...
Possible linky to:
A30334916 - Frankfurt am Main, Germany - Where Past Meets Present
Other than that I can't find any else.
I'll keep looking.
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Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor Posted Mar 4, 2013
I like sentences that start with 'and', myself. I think that's an old English teacher tale.
I'd say, leave the first sentence alone.
Change the second sentence to 'They make the reader work.' You're right, that's stronger.
Good link, add it.
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Magwitch - My name is Mags and I am funky. Posted Mar 4, 2013
Link added.
Second sentence only has been changed .
I'll have another look in a wee while, see if I can find anything else.
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Magwitch - My name is Mags and I am funky. Posted Mar 5, 2013
Found a couple more linky dinks:
A3764621 - Email - an Introduction
A273566 - Vampires
Mags
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Magwitch - My name is Mags and I am funky. Posted Mar 11, 2013
Worked in those other links, I don't think there's anything else I can add to it.
If you're happy with this, then I am also.
Mags
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