A Conversation for Determination of Eye Colour

Subediting notes for "Determination of Eye Colour" (A734933)

Post 1

Robert

Hi,
I'm your subeditor for this entry and will be checking it for spelling, grammer and GuideML mistakes. If you have any questions about the Peer Review process, you can post them here. I'll post any changes that I want to make to this thread as well.

Axe


Subediting notes for "Determination of Eye Colour" (A734933)

Post 2

Robert

*checks his records*

Sorry about that, I've been a bit busy. I've finished the editing and I'm going to submit it on Monday. If you have any questions or comments, please post them before Monday or I won't be able to make changes to the entry.


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Post 3

SallyM

Nothing to add really. Thankyou for being my subeditor.

SallyM smiley - smiley


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Post 4

SallyM

Oops I forgot something

This bbc site seems a quite good link to put with the article

http://www.bbc.co.uk/science/genes/who_am_i/inheriting_genes/eyecolour_interactive.shtml

I guess you have read Reika's comments in the conversation to the original article. As I wrote a bit further down I like it simple yet correct so thanks for keeping it that way.

SallyM smiley - smiley


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Post 5

SallyM

Oh something else. Sorry I'll probably keep doing this.

Potholer doesn't want to be on the list of researchers as he doesn't think he has helped that much and it looks like (as his name is at the top) he has written the article. (we've had a debate about this). I was wondering if something like this could be added.

This article was written originally by SallyM, but she wants to make sure credit is given to Potholer who has helped out enormously with the red eye information and Ugi who helped out with the genetics information.

What do you think?

SallyM smiley - smiley


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Post 6

Ashley


Hey SallyM

Unfortunately we can't list Researchers in order of the contribution they have made to the site - but it is something that is being looked at. smiley - smiley

The only pages we reference in Edited Guide Entries are other Edited Guide Entries and sound web pages. I will add the link anon...

Thanks for a great entry. smiley - cheers


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Post 7

SallyM

I thought about what nice picture I could have for the article. I wondered if it could be a picture of the eye with the iris changing colour in a rainbow?

SallyM smiley - smiley


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